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Post  centrehead Sat Feb 09, 2008 1:54 pm

All of you, please 'improve' the following phrases so that they are grammatically correct and meaningful:

‘Plz. come within time’
‘the suitable time for take a begining step’
‘there is lots of spelling mistake’
‘All above thing is copied from a book’
‘its my thinging & i want to apply this all think’
‘always suggest to me please keep continuous/regular’
‘batch is very good because all friends are very familiar’
‘we get best opportunities from this institute spcialy our best faculties’(Dushyant, are you sure it will be ‘specially’?)

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Post  Aditi Raghuvanshi Mon Feb 11, 2008 12:47 am

Good Morning Sir ,
I tried to correct these phrases but don't know these are correct or not :

"PLEASE COME WITHIN THE TIME".
"ITS A SUITABLE TIME TO TAKE A BEGINNING STEP "
"THERE ARE LOTS OF SPELLING MISTAKES "
"ALL THE ABOVE THINGS ARE COPIED FROM A BOOK "
"ITS MY THINKING AND I WANT TO APPLY ALL THESE THINGS"
" PLEASE ALWAYS SUGGEST TO ME "or " PLEASE GIVE REGULAR SUGGESTIONS TO ME "
"BATCH IS VERY GOOD BECAUSE ALL THE STUDENTS ARE FAMILIAR WITH EACH OTHER"
'WE GOT AN OPPORTUNITY FROM THIS INSTITUTE, SPECIALLY FROM ITS BEST FACULTY"


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Post  centrehead Mon Feb 11, 2008 9:05 am

well tried Aditi but some improvements can still be made in your entry.

C'mon students, rush your entries or Aditi is going to get the prize.

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Post  Pranay patni Mon Feb 11, 2008 12:50 pm

Plz. come within time’
‘the suitable time for take a begining step’
‘there is lots of spelling mistake’
‘All above thing is copied from a book’
‘its my thinging & i want to apply this all think’
‘always suggest to me please keep continuous/regular’
‘batch is very good because all friends are very familiar’
‘we get best opportunities from this institute spcialy our best faculties’(Dushyant, are you sure it will be ‘specially’?)

CORRECTIONS

Please come in time.
The suitable time for taking a begining steps.
There are lots of spelling mistake.
All the above things are copied from book.
It is my thinking and I want to apply this thinking to all.
Please keep suggesting me continuously.
The batch is very good because all the students are familiar with each other.
We got a very good opportunity because of best faculty in the institude.

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Post  harshi_42 Tue Feb 12, 2008 1:07 pm

Plz. come within time’
‘the suitable time for take a begining step’
‘there is lots of spelling mistake’
‘All above thing is copied from a book’
‘its my thinging & i want to apply this all think’
‘always suggest to me please keep continuous/regular’
‘batch is very good because all friends are very familiar’
‘we get best opportunities from this institute spcialy our best faculties’(Dushyant, are you sure it will be ‘specially’?)

Correction:-
Please come on right time.
suitable time to taking a step.
There are lot of spelling mistake.
All above think are copied by a book.
its my own thinking & i want to apply all these thinking in my life.
Always suggest me & please be continue/regular
Batch is very good because all students are familiar.
We get best opportunity from this institute, especially our faculty.

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Post  swati chourasia Wed Feb 13, 2008 4:24 pm

‘Plz. come within time’
‘the suitable time for take a begining step’
‘there is lots of spelling mistake’
‘All above thing is copied from a book’
‘its my thinging & i want to apply this all think’
‘always suggest to me please keep continuous/regular’
‘batch is very good because all friends are very familiar’
‘we get best opportunities from this institute spcialy our best faculties’(Dushyant, are you sure it will be ‘specially’?)
Corrections:-
PLEASE COME IN TIME.
THE RIGHT TIME TO TAKE A BEGINNING STEP.
THERE ARE LOTS OF SPELLING MISTAKES.
ALL ABOVE THINGS ARE COPIED FROM A BOOK.
IT'S MY THINKING & I WANT TO APPLY THIS.
PLEASE KEEP SUGGESTING ME.
THE BATCH IS VERY GOOD BECAUSE ALL STUDENTS OF THIS BATCH ARE FAMILIAR TO EACH OTHER.
WE GET BEST OPPORTUNITIES IN THIS INSTITUTE SPECIALLY BECAUSE OF BEST FACULTIES OF THIS INSTITUTE.

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Post  swati chourasia Wed Feb 13, 2008 4:48 pm

‘Plz. come within time’
‘the suitable time for take a begining step’
‘there is lots of spelling mistake’
‘All above thing is copied from a book’
‘its my thinging & i want to apply this all think’
‘always suggest to me please keep continuous/regular’
‘batch is very good because all friends are very familiar’
‘we get best opportunities from this institute spcialy our best faculties’(Dushyant, are you sure it will be ‘specially’?)
Corrections:-
Please come in time.
The right time to take a beginning step.
There are lots of spelling mistakes.
All above things are copied from a book.
It's my thinking & I want to apply it.
Please keep suggesting me.
The batch is very good because all students of this batch are familiar to each other.
We get best opportunities in this institute specially because of best faculties of the institute.

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Post  ankit_jain2008 Wed Feb 13, 2008 4:59 pm

‘Plz. come within time’
‘the suitable time for take a begining step’
‘there is lots of spelling mistake’
‘All above thing is copied from a book’
‘its my thinging & i want to apply this all think’
‘always suggest to me please keep continuous/regular’
‘batch is very good because all friends are very familiar’
‘we get best opportunities from this institute spcialy our best faculties’(Dushyant, are you sure it will be ‘specially’?)
Corrections:-
PLEASE COME IN TIME.
THE RIGHT TIME TO TAKE A BEGINNING STEP.
THERE ARE LOTS OF SPELLING MISTAKES.
ALL ABOVE THINGS ARE COPIED FROM A BOOK.
IT'S MY THINKING & I WANT TO APPLY THIS.
PLEASE KEEP SUGGESTING ME.
THE BATCH IS VERY GOOD BECAUSE ALL STUDENTS OF THIS BATCH ARE FAMILIAR TO EACH OTHER.
WE GET BEST OPPORTUNITIES IN THIS INSTITUTE SPECIALLY BECAUSE OF BEST FACULTIES OF THIS INSTITUTE.

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Post  centrehead Fri Feb 15, 2008 5:44 pm

English facilitators and students, please go through the suggested answers and let us know if there are any errors or if they can be improved further. Once we are all agreed on the correct framing, we can decide the winner.

‘Plz. come within time’
come on time is both simple and correct although it is is not the only way of putting it.
‘within the specified time’ means that one can come anytime between the specified start and end.

‘the suitable time for take a begining step’
the suitable time to make a beginning or the suitable time to take the first/initial step. Here again we can keep it simple by saying that the ‘the right time for starting’

‘there is lots of spelling mistake’
‘are lots of spelling mistakes’ or ‘many spelling mistakes’. do we say ‘many tall boys’ or ‘many tall boy’?

‘All above thing is copied from a book’
All of the above is copied from the book ‘pqr’ by ‘wxy’ or ‘the above lines/sentences/paragraphs are copied’ Check out the meaning of verbatim.

‘its my thinging & i want to apply this all think’
It is my thinking and I want to implement every element of it in my day to day activities

‘always suggest to me please keep continuous/regular’
‘They always advise me to be regular’ or ‘advise me to attend sessions regularly’ or
‘Their suggestion to me has always been that I should be regular.’

‘batch is very good because all friends are very familiar’ batch acchha hai kyon ki sab dost ek doosray ko pehchantey/jaantey hain  is this what the student wanted to say?
Is ‘all friends know each other well or are familiar with each other’ the right translation?

‘we get best opportunities from this institute spcialy our best faculties’(Dushyant, are you sure it will be ‘specially’?)
We get many oppurtunities/facilities and the faculty members are among the best I have encountered in my life. It is nto advisable to use ‘faculty’ but if you use only ‘faculty’, remember to use ‘is’ since faculty when used to refer to teachers is a collective noun. What is the other meaning of faculty?
I had the notion that especially should be used instead of specially and this is what I found on further research:

specially - for a particular purpose
However, when specially is used to mean for a particular purpose, this form of the adverb is the norm:
• This shower gel is specially designed for people with sensitive skins.
• This computer programme is specially for children with learning difficulties.
• My father made this model aeroplane specially for me.

especially - particularly / above all
We tend to use especially for emphasis, meaning particularly or above all:
• These butterflies are particularly noticeable in April and May, especially in these meadows.
• You'll enjoy playing tennis at our local club, especially on weekdays when it's not so busy.

Before adjectives, meaning particularly, especially is more usual:
• The road between Cairo and Alexandria is especially dangerous at night.
• It is a bit nippy, but it's not especially cold for this time of year.
Source:http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/grammar/learnit/learnitv265.shtml

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Post  kunal sahu Mon Feb 18, 2008 7:07 pm

Plz. come within time’
‘the suitable time for take a beginning step’
‘there is lots of spelling mistake’
‘All above thing is copied from a book’
‘its my thinking & I want to apply this all thing’
‘always suggest to me please keep continuous/regular’
‘batch is very good because all friends are very familiar’
‘we get best opportunities from this institute specially our best faculties’(Dushyant, are you sure it will be ‘specially’?)

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